Saturday, August 4, 2007
my version of extract. ( weiting 2F )
Angel and I were roaming aimlessly around the funfair when she spotted a haunted house.
“Let's go inside, Jennifer! It looks like fun!" Angle exclaimed.
"H...H...aunted h...h...ouse? It looks scary," I stammered.
"Are you scared? If you are, you could stand outside and wait for me," she replied.
"Scared? Are you kidding? Of course I'm not!" I said. But deep down my heart, I was shaking like a leaf.
As we entered the haunted house, it was all dark. I couldn't even see my fingers! I had to grope around the place so that I could find my way out. Suddenly, I thought of Angel. I had totally forgotten about her. I grapped a hand which was near me and told her to stay near me.
Suddenly, as we were walking, I accidently hit my leg against something. Something which was hard. "Ouch!" I cried. I felt a stinging pain on my left foot. I hobbled around and called Angel to help me out of the haunted house.
When we got out of the haunted house, I saw Angel waiting outside me. "Why did you take such a long time to find your way out of the haunted house?" she said. Feeling that something is wrong, I looked at whoose hands I was grabbing. It was one of the "ghosts"! I was so embarassed that my face turned red immediately. When the "ghost" went back to the haunted house, I slinked away from Angel, who was laughing hysterically.
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